- Summer Quarter at 2010 -
Hey guys my name is Mingjie He, I came from Shanghai, China. I have been here in US for seven months. Today is my first of Liz's writing class. I met our nice teacher and friendly classmates, I was so happy to meet them. I hope we will have so much fun and learn lots of writing skills in this class in this summer. I'm looking forward to it!
Hey guys my name is Mingjie He, I came from Shanghai, China. I have been here in US for seven months. Today is my first of Liz's writing class. I met our nice teacher and friendly classmates, I was so happy to meet them. I hope we will have so much fun and learn lots of writing skills in this class in this summer. I'm looking forward to it!
Welcome to the class, Ming Jie! I think you will learn a lot. A few small changes to make (go to "edit post" to make them)
ReplyDeleteremove "of" and use a comma: Shanghai, China.
remove "the": my first day of Liz's
Let's expect it is a little awkward - maybe change to: I'm looking forward to it!